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新祥旭考研官网 http:/www.xxxedu.net/考研闪光点让你的英语作文脱颖而出作文是各类英语考试中得分较低的一种题型,究其原因,除了平时缺少练习之外,同学们还缺乏作文抓分技巧。同学们需要掌握一定的作文模板,除此之外,如果能在作文中设置一些词汇和句型的闪光点,必定使你的作文如虎添翼。高分作文标志:1、是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3 、用词是否多样、准确、形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;5 、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:1.适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而用 Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾的例子:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.新祥旭考研官网 http:/www.xxxedu.net/2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作为插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词、助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。举例如下:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如第一条的例子中,applicable 替换 proper; approaches 替换 ways; implement替换 carry out; sharpen ones competitive edge 替换 enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法,精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world 新祥旭考研官网 http:/www.xxxedu.net/belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very;(个人认为替换成 overwhelmingly 更出彩)thrilling 替换 exciting;sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth;google 替换 search;an army of 替换 a lot of.The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;新祥旭考研官网 http:/www.xxxedu.net/Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular;Coincident with非常地道的句型,表达“与一致”的意思,替换With;Advancement 替换 development;Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into;Current ( currently )替换 now;Appeal to sb.替换 sb. be interested in sth.;Growing individuals 替换 more and more people;It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的。(it goes without exaggeration that 更好)For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.新祥旭考研官网 http:/www.xxxedu.net/For a start 替换 To begin with;We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法;our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动;Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides;Deliver 替换 send.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,* , porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先 There is no denying that 这个句型;其次 however 作为插入语 ;再次,function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to.新祥旭考研官网 http:/www.xxxedu.net/Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing );Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词。(直接用 netizen 更好)As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides;Computers do play,使用 do 表示强调;Positive 替换 important / good 等;A slice of 替换 a part of;Unfavorable 替换 bad;Impacts 替换 effects / influences;We should, therefore, take advantage of使用插入语;新祥旭考研官网 http:/www.xxxedu.net/Fruits (而且 fruits 用的非常形象,merits/ virtues)替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage );Facet 替换 aspect.以下是 45 个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下:1.individuals,characters , folks 替换 people ,persons.2.positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good.3.dreadful , unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad(如果 bad 做表语,可以有 be less impressive 替换。)eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host 新祥旭考研官网 http:/www.xxxedu.net/of, many, if not most 替换 many.注:用 many, if not most 一定要小心,many 后一定要有词。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that。同理用most, if not all ,替换 most.5.a slice of, quiet a few 替换 some.6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 替换think (因为是书面语,所以要加 that)。7.affair ,business ,matter 替换 thing.8.shared 代 common .9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits.10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion.11.Increasing(ly),growing 替换 more and more(注意没有 growingly新祥旭考研官网 http:/www.xxxedu.net/这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.)Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything 或 little or nothing 替换 hardly.13.beneficial, rewarding 替换 helpful.14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser 替换 customer.15.overwhelmingly,exceedingly ,extremely, intensely 替换 very.16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable 替换 unnecessary, avoidable.17.indispensable 替换 necessary18.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb take interest in / sb. be interested in.新祥旭考研官网 http:/www.xxxedu.net/19.capture ones attention 替换 attract ones attention.20.facet,demension,sphere 代 aspect.21.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of 代 indicate, suggest ,fear.22.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换 cause.23. There are several reasons behind sth 替换reasons for sth.24.desire 替换 want.25.pour attention into 替换 pay attention to.26.bear in mind that 替换 remember.27. enjoy, possess 替换 have(注意 process 是过程的意思)。28. interaction 替换 communication.29.frown on sth 替换 be against , disagree with sth .